Here are a few options for a formal rewrite, depending on the specific focus of your piece:
- Option 1 (Direct and analytical): Assessing the Limited Efficacy of Australia’s Under-16 Social Media Restrictions
- Option 2 (Academic/Policy-focused): An Evaluation of the Impact of Australian Legislation Limiting Social Media Access for Minors
- Option 3 (Concise and formal): The Restricted Efficacy of Australia’s Under-16 Social Media Ban
Recommendation: Option 1 is likely the most standard choice for a professional article or report.