Here are a few options, depending on the specific nuance you want:
- Formal and direct: “Scrutiny Mounts Following Notre Dame’s Recruitment of Five-Star Prospect Albert Simien”
- Concise: “Controversy Surrounding Notre Dame’s Acquisition of Five-Star Recruit Albert Simien”
- Refined: “Questions Arise Regarding Notre Dame’s Recent Signing of Five-Star Talent Albert Simien”
Recommendation: The first option (“Scrutiny Mounts Following Notre Dame’s Recruitment of Five-Star Prospect Albert Simien”) carries the most professional and journalistic tone.